雅思写作地图
雅思小作文地图题|高分写作思路 + 20条高分句型
地图题90%考题为动态变迁类(同一地点不同年份对比),少数是静态选址对比;词数150–180词
一、高分写作思路(标准4段式,必带Overview概述段)
1. 开头段(1句)
改写原题,替换同义词:map=diagram/illustration;show=illustrate/depict;changes=developments;点明地点+时间区间。
2. Overview概述段(1–2句,7分硬性要求,不能省略)
概括两大宏观信息:
① 整体大变化(城市化、大量住宅修建、农田消失、交通升级)
② 有没有部分区域保持不变(河流、主干道、公园等不变的地方简单提一句)
不要写细小建筑变化,只写整体趋势
3. 主体段1(空间逻辑:北部+中部)
按方位分组描述,对比写(原来有什么→后来变成什么),优先用被动语态(建筑不能自己建造/拆除)。
方位介词区分:
in the east:在内部东边
on the east:接壤东边
to the east:不接壤、相隔一段距离
4. 主体段2(空间逻辑:南部+西部)
继续描述剩下区域的改建、新增、拆除项目;
分段优先推荐按南北方位划分,不要生硬写完第一张图再单独写第二张,对比融合在一起分数更高。
时态规则(扣分重灾区)
两个过去年份:一般过去时 / 过去完成时
过去→现在:现在完成时(has been built)
未来规划:be expected / projected / planned to(将来含义)
二、20条高分常用句型
① 开头改写
1. The two diagrams illustrate the developments that took place in this town over the period from 1990 to 2020.
这两张图展示了该镇1990至2020年间发生的发展变化。
2. The map depicts how the layout of the village changed during the 30-year period.
该图描述这个村庄的布局在30年间如何发生改变。
3. Shown in the illustrations are the planned redevelopment of this coastal area.
图中展示了这片沿海区域规划中的重新开发方案。
② Overview总述
4. Overall, it is clear that the area experienced substantial urbanisation, with more residential and commercial facilities constructed.
总的来看,该地区经历了大规模城市化,修建了更多住宅与商业设施。
5. The most noticeable transformation was that large areas of farmland were replaced by housing estates.
最显著的变化是大片农田被住宅区取代。
6. While most parts of the site were redeveloped, the river running through the town remained untouched.
尽管这片区域大部分被重新开发,贯穿城镇的河流保持原样。
7. In general, the village was transformed from an agricultural region into a modern residential area.
总体而言,这个村庄从农业区域转变为现代化居住区。
③ 方位描述
8. A large woodland was located in the north-west corner of the village in 1980.
1980年,一大片林地坐落在村庄的西北角。
9. To the south of the main road lay a stretch of farmland.
主干道南边有一片农田。(倒装高分句式)
10. The new shopping centre stands on the opposite side of the river.
新购物中心坐落于河的对岸。
11. The newly built railway runs from the west to the east of the whole district.
新建的铁路从整片区域的西部延伸至东部。
12. In the central part of the town, there was a small park surrounded by several shops.
城镇中心有一座被多家商店环绕的小公园。
13. The car park is situated adjacent to the primary school.
停车场紧挨着小学。
④ 描述变化
14. The old houses were demolished to make way for a multi-storey car park.
老房子被拆除,用来修建多层停车场。
15. The original farmland has been converted into a large residential zone.
原先的农田已经被改造为大型住宅区。
16. A new sports complex was erected where the old factory used to be.
在旧工厂的原址上建起了一座新的综合运动中心。
17. The narrow path was widened into a main road to accommodate more traffic.
狭窄小路被拓宽为主干道,以容纳更多车流。
18. It is projected that a new medical centre will be built beside the lake.
按照规划,湖边将会修建一座新医疗中心。
19. The area of the park was reduced after the construction of the railway station.
火车站修建之后,公园面积缩小了。
20. No significant alterations could be seen in the southern part of the map.
地图南部没有出现明显改动。