雅思写作动态图
雅思写作 Task1 动态图(折线/柱状/表格,有时间变化)
高分写作思路(四段式)
动态图核心:描述趋势(上升/下降/波动/平稳)+ 关键数据(起点、终点、峰值、谷值、对比)
1. 开头段(1句):同义改写题目,说明图表展示什么、时间范围、对象
2. 概述段(Overview,必写!2句)
第一句:整体最主要趋势(整体上升 / 整体下降 / 有的升有的降)
第二句:找最突出特征(谁最高、谁最低、变化幅度最大)
概述不要放具体数字,只写宏观特征
3. 主体段1:分组描述第一组数据(例如:上升类归一组),搭配起点、终点、峰值、变化幅度
4. 主体段2:分组描述剩下的数据(下降/波动类),适当做对比
分组技巧:按趋势分组(全部上升放一段,下降放一段)>按对象分组,逻辑更清晰
20条动态图高分句型
开头改写
1. The line graph illustrates changes in the proportion of … over the period from … to …
该折线图展示了……从……到……期间占比的变化
2. The bar chart depicts how the number of … varied between 1990 and 2020.
该柱状图描述了……的数量在1990至2020年间如何变化
3. It can be seen that there were considerable differences in … during this time frame.
可以看出,在此时间段内……存在巨大差异
Overview 概述段
4. Overall, it is clear that the percentage of … increased dramatically, while that of … declined gradually.
总体来看,很明显……的占比急剧上升,而……的占比逐步下降
5. To sum up, all categories experienced an upward trend over the given period.
总而言之,所有类别在给定时间段内都呈现上升趋势
6. The most noticeable feature is that … saw the largest growth throughout the years.
最显著的特点是……在这些年间增幅最大
7. In general, the figures for … remained relatively stable in the whole period.
总体而言,……的数据在整个时期保持相对稳定
描述上升
8. The proportion of people choosing A rose sharply from 10% in 1995 to 40% in 2015.
选择A的人群占比从1995年的10%急剧上升至2015年的40%
9. There was a substantial increase in the number of … over the two decades.
在这二十年间,……的数量出现大幅增长
10. The figure for B climbed steadily, reaching a peak of 65% in 2005.
B的数据稳步攀升,在2005年达到峰值65%
11. The percentage of C showed an upward trend, despite some minor fluctuations.
尽管存在小幅波动,C的占比呈现上升趋势
描述下降
12. The amount of D fell markedly from 8 million to 3 million within 10 years.
D的数量在10年内从800万显著下降至300万
13. A gradual decline could be observed in the share of … during the period.
在此期间可以观察到……的份额逐步下降
14. The number of E plummeted in the first five years before levelling off.
E的数量在前五年暴跌,之后趋于平稳
15. The proportion of F dipped to a low point of 12% in 2010.
F的占比在2010年跌至最低点12%
波动、持平、对比
16. The data for G fluctuated between 20% and 35% over the whole period.
G的数据在整段时间内在20%至35%之间波动
17. The figure for H stayed constant at roughly 50% from 2000 to 2010.
H的数据从2000到2010年稳定维持在大约50%
18. In contrast, the percentage of I was much lower than that of J in all surveyed years.
相比之下,在所有调查年份里I的占比远低于J
19. Similarly, K witnessed a similar pattern, with a slow rise followed by a drop.
类似地,K呈现相似变化模式:先缓慢上升随后下降
20. By the end of the period, A had become the largest category, overtaking B.
到该时段末期,A反超B,成为占比最大的类别
急剧地:sharply / dramatically / substantially / markedly
稳步地:steadily / moderately / gradually
小幅地:slightly / marginally
峰值:reach a peak / hit the highest point
谷值:reach a trough / dip to the lowest level
趋于平稳:level off / remain stable