雅思7Test 4写作高分范文-湛江雅思培训中心

WRITING

Task 1

范文

The table gives the breakdown about data on consumer spending on various items (Food/ Drink/ Tobacco, Clothing/ Footwear and Leisure/ Education) in five different countries (Ireland, Italy, Spain,Sweden and Turkey) in 2002.

Generally, each country consumed much more in food/ drink/ tobacco where Turkey dominated the first place with 32.14%, standing in marked contrast with Sweden (only15.77%) than in other 2categories. In terms of Clothing/Footwear, Italy expectedly spent most with 9% compared with still Sweden seeing the smallest proportion (5.4%). As for Leisure/ Education, it was Turkey and Spain that consumed the most and least with 4.35% and 1.98% respectively.

Additionally, we can see immediately that in food/ drink/ tobacco, after Turkey, Ireland, Spain and Italy came in turn with 28.91%, 18.80% and 16.36%. On the contrary, in Clothing/ Footwear, we failed to see big gap from Spain, Ireland and Sweden in middle positions which saw different reductions of2.49%, 2.57% and 3.6% in comparison with Italy, likewise, in Leisure/ Education, still small differences were found. To be exact, Turkey was followed by Sweden, Italy and Ireland in a slow falling turn with 3.22%, 3.2% and 2.21%.

In conclusion, people prefer to spend on those products directly relating to food.

范文翻译

这个图表分析了5个国家2002年(爱尔兰、意大利、西班牙、瑞典和土耳其)在不同商品(食品/饮料/烟草、服饰/鞋、休闲商品/教育产品)上的消费情况。

总的来看，每个国家在食品/饮料/烟草的花费要远远多于其他两类。土耳其在此类商品上面的花费多达32.14%，是最多的。与之形成鲜明对比的是瑞典，只有15.77%。就服饰和鞋而言，意大利的花费是最多的，达到9%，这一点在意料之中，而瑞典的花费相比较而言是最少的(5.4%).在休闲类和教育类商品方面，土耳其和西班牙分列第一位和最后一位，分别达到4.35%和1.98%。

此外，我们很快就可以发现，在食品/饮料/烟草方面，爱尔兰、西班牙和意大利依次排

在土耳其之后分别达到28.91%、18.80%和16.36%。相反，在服饰和鞋方面，我们发现西班牙、爱尔兰和瑞典这些处在中间位置的国家之间并没有太大的差距，和意大利相比，他们的值分别下降了2.49%、2.57%和3.6%。同样、在休闲类和教育类商品方面，依然没有发现太大的差距，确切地讲，瑞典、意大利和爱尔兰排在土耳其之后，分别缓慢地下降了3.22%、3.2%和2.21%。

总而言之，人们在与饮食直接相关的商品上的花费是最高的。

文章布局分析

范文由4段组成：第一段为引言段，介绍这个图的基本情况；第二段点出表格的极值信息；第三段比较表格的信息；最后一段总结和归纳。

Task 2

审题

这个话题属于典型的雅思议论文的 argumentation类型。我们可以从正方和反方(for andagainst) 两方面来阐述, 也可以侧重某一方面。核心词汇包括: are born with, talents, be taught。

范文

Whenever people talk about what make successful persons such as outstanding athletes or musicians,their views will certainly differ from that nature fills a dominant role in determining if one may possibly become an expert in some field to that it is. nurture that exerts direct effects.

It must be admitted that there indeed exist some people born with innate talents which predict the possibility for a would-be winner. In other words, without these suitable characters which more or less are beneficial to master some skills, there is little likelihood to become elites in an area. Also, there is growing evidence that those with born talents achieve more than those who do not have, which naturally become a motivator for further triumph. Therefore, an increasing number of parents begin to observe or even experiment to judge if their children fortunately possess some talents to allow them to excel.

However, some people still argue for the belief that with professional and systematic training, each one may have not surprisingly brilliant performance in not only academic but also entertainment field. Those who are capable of making amazing achievement in later. days, as a matte of fact, nave inherited some talents via genes if researched carefully. As a result, if not having enviable talents,sound education system and hard working can at most quality someone in one field, but never send him/ her to the top.

In conclusion, my strongly held view is that natural talents are the prerequisite for anyone who desire to be excellent in some areas like sport and art, but subsequent professional training will unquestionably endow anyone with basic skills.

范文翻译

人们谈到什么可以造就成功人士比如出色的运动员或者音乐家时，观点自然就会出现差异。有的人认为天性在决定一个人是否会成为某个领域的专家方面发挥了主导的作用，有的人认为是后天的培养对此产生了直接的影响。

必须要承认，的确存在着那些生来就具备一些天分的人，这些天分预示他们会胜出的可能性。换句话说，如果不具备这些对掌握某种技能有某种程度帮助的天性，就几乎没有成为精英的可能。此外，越来越多的证据表明，具备一些天分的人会比那些没有这方面天分的人取得更大的成就，这也成为了取得进一步成功的动力。因此，越来越多的家长开始观察甚至做实验来检验自己的孩子是否有幸具备一些使之超越他人的天分。

但是，有的人却同意这个理念，即有了专业和系统的培训，在学术或娱乐领域，每个人都会毫不惊奇地带来惊人的表现。事实上，如果仔细观察，那些后来创造惊人成就的学生已经从父辈那里继承了一些基因。因此，如果没有令人羡慕的天赋，良好的教育体系和自身的努力最多可以使一个人在某个领域不落伍，而无法使其登上顶峰。

总而言之，我坚定地认为天分是成为体育、音乐等领域顶尖人物的前提，毫无疑问，后天的培养只能赋予人们一些基本技巧。

文章布局分析

范文采用了对称式结构，第一段点题并提及双方观点，正文两段进行正反两方的论证，最后一段亮出自己的看法。