大学英语六级考试写作强化(四)讲解-湛江雅托教育培训中心
湛江雅托教育培训中心大学英语六级写作讲解
题目
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay related to the short passage given below. In your essay, you are to comment on the phenomenon described in the passage and suggest measures to address the issue.
You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. Young people spend a lot of time on the internet. However, they are sometimes unable to recognize false information on the internet, judge the reliability of online information sources, or tell real news stories from fake ones.
Being Cautious about False Information Online
第1段描述现象,引出话题:年轻人很容易被网上的虚假信息所误导。
【1】The Internet is a complex and dynamic world full of all sorts of information.Unfortunately,some of it isn't that great.Lacking enough consideration,we,especially young people,are easily misled by false information which always appears in bulk on the web page.
第2段针对现象做出评论,并提出建议,指出可从几个方面入手来避 免被虚假信息所误导。
【2】To avoid being misguided by those irresponsible mass media,we can start from the following aspects.【3】To begin with,one should think twice upon reading online comments and information,as they may be groundless and fictitious just to catch people's attention【4】What's more,young people should also shoulder their responsibility and only forward official information released by the relevant departments.We must be cautious and careful so as not to become loudspeakers for rumors.【5】Last but not least,to deter people from fabricating and spreading rumors and false information, and to punish those who do so,laws and regulations with clear penalties should be implemented and enforced.
第3段总结全文,重申观点。
【6】As the saying goes,it is better not to believe in books at all, rather than to believe in them implicitly.Likewise,in the age of information explosion,one should make his own judgment based on real facts and experience.
解析
【1】描述现象,引出话题:互联网充斥 着各种信息,年轻人很容易被虚假信息所误导。
【2】表明自己的观点,指出我们可从几个方面入手来避免被虚假信息所误导。
【3】【4】【5】分别使用to begin with、what's more和last but not least给出自己的建议:首先,人们在看到网络评论和信息时应该三思;此外,年轻人应谨慎转发相关信息,避免成为制造谣言的扩音器; 再者,对于编造、传播谣言和虚假信息的违规者应进行处罚。
【6】利用俗语“尽信书,则不如无书” 重申自己的观点,建议大家应根据事实和经验来判断网络信息的真伪。
话题词汇
uncontrolled 不受控制的
chaotic 混乱的
one-sided 片面的
groundless 无根据的
mislead 误导
fabricate 编造
mass media大众媒体
be indulged in network 沉迷于网络
at an unprecedented rate 以空前的速度
catch one's eyes 吸引眼球
be hard to distinguish between the true and the false 难辨真伪