大学英语四级写作指导
写作的句式:
To Become a Specialist or a Generalist
首段:
When it comes to...,...【引出有争议的话题】
改写:When it comes to whether a student should become a specialist or a generalist,there is no complete agreement among people.
When it comes to...,there is no complete agreement among people.
Some people think that+从句...【提出对立观点①】
Some people think that it is the best for college students to focus on developing skills in one field to become a specialist.
Some people think that it is the best for sb to focus on doing sth in one field to do sth.
However,others maintain that+从句...【提出对立观点②】
However,others maintain that a versatile generalist is more welcomed in the competitive job market.
However,others maintain that +主语 is more welcomed in...
中间段:
Those people who hold the former opinion believe that+从句...【用于引出第一种观点的理由】
Those people who hold the former opinion believe that it is impossible to demand college students to become an all-round generalist within four years.
In addition,...【衔接词语是文章条理清晰,意思连贯①】
In addition,in their opinion,with increasing elaboration of social division,the specialists with professional skills are in more urgent need in every field.
However,still others advocate the different opinion. They hold that+从句...【用于引出相反观点的论证】
However,still others advocate the different opinion. They hold that college students should stretch themselves to as many fields as possible to adapt to the increasingly fierce competition.
Besides,...【衔接词语是文章条理清晰,意思连贯②】
Besides,generalists who have knowledge on several areas are highly demanded in the information age.
结尾段:
Personally,I am in favor of the former opinion.【用于引出个人观点】
Personally,I am in favor of the former opinion.
For one thing,I don’t think【否定转移】
For one thing,I don’t think it is advisable that college students equally spend their time and energy on several fields at the same time.
For another,....【衔接词语是文章条理清晰,意思连贯】
For another,the development of high-tech needs specialists and enterprises usually offer specialists higher salaries.
Taking above mentioned factors into consideration,I may reasonably conclude that+从句......【得出结论(意思为)“鉴于以上因素,我可以合理的得出这样的结论......”】
Taking above mentioned factors into consideration,I may reasonably conclude that to be a specialist is the right choice for most students.