大学英语四级写作第1课学习

大学英语四级写作第1课学习

 

Directions: Suppose you are going to write a proposal to your school library for improving its service. You are to write about its current problems and possible solutions to these problems.

 

You will have 30 minutes to write the proposal. You should write at least 120 words but no more

than 180 words.

 

A Proposal on Improving Library Service

 

第1段引入话题：校图书馆对大学生来说非常重要，应该改进服务。

第2段具体论证：讨论图书馆服务中存在的问题，有针对性地提出解决方案。

第3段表达期望：希望上述的建议会被采纳。如被采纳图书馆将迎来新的发展。

 

A Proposal on Improving Library Service.【1】The school library is an important resource for university study. Making full use of the academic resources in the library can benefit college students a lot.【2】However, it fails to meet the demands of students in several aspects. It is high time to improve library service.

 

【3】One of students 5 complaints is insufficient support from librarians, especially when IT support is n e e d ed .【4】Therefore, relevant training courses should be offered so that librarians can provide better and timely help. 【5】 The second aspect is about the opening hours of our library, from 8：00 am to 10：00 pm, which many students think is too short in times of final exams and while preparing for the postgraduate entrance exam. 【6】So I suggest that opening hours be extended from 6：00 am to l l ：30 pm with help of student volunteers. 

 

【7】 With the above suggestions taken into consideration, I believe, students’ satisfaction will climb, school library will embrace new development and our university will have a brighter future.

 

【1】介绍图书馆的重要作用。

【2】使 用 However转折引出图书馆的不足。

【3】介绍图书馆管理员在解决学生问题方面尚需改进，并在

【4】中提出培训的解决方案。

【5】介绍图书馆开放时间不能满足学生需求的问题。

【6】提出延长开放时间的建议。

【7】总结全文，表达期望。

 

话题词汇：

lounge areas 休闲区

reserve a sea t预约座位

electronic resources 电子资源

temporary closure 临时闭馆

lost and damaged books 书籍损毁

locker储物柜

open around the clock 24 小时开馆

database use数据库使用

self-service machines自助（借还书、查询）机

photocopied articles 影印文档

academic services学术活动服务

inter-library loans 馆际互借