英语专业四级写作1：寄送包裹是否应该实名制？
Read carefully the following excerpt on real-name package delivery in China, and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 200 words, in which you should:
●summarize the main message of the excerpt,and then
●comment on whether sending package should require real-name registration.
You should support yourself with information from the excerpt.
Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.
Under New Crackdown, Sending Packages Now Requires an ID Card
China's State Post Bureau announced on Monday that it will start a nationwide campaign to crack down on illegal activities by enforcing real-name registration for senders. The nation's new rules require senders to present official ID, especially when sending from a public place, such as hotels or train stations. The rules also stipulate that packages should go through an X-ray machine for a security check.
China began to mull a real-name registration policy in the industry after parcels tainted with toxic chemicals killed a man in East China's Shandong Province and poisoned seven others in December 2013.
A staff member surnamed Chen working in a post office in Hohhot said that senders must take their original ID cards to the post office."The couriers will scan and record your ID information.
Senders don't need to worry about personal information being in secure. For instance, there will be specially-assigned personnel to keep and manage all this information," Chen added.
However, many Net users still expressed concern over the leak of personal information in real-name registration. Zhu Hong, an associate professor told the mass media that whether the real-name registration system would hold back packages containing illegal or hazardous goods is not clear. "We can trace the senders now with phone numbers. Registering ID cards might only speed up the process a bit".
写作思路
考生在下笔之前应先审题,明确写作要求:针对“寄送包裹是否应该实名制“这一热议话题,首先总结材料中的主要观点,然后提出个人看法。文章结构可安排如下:
第一段:简要概括材料中所指明的现象。因为快递运输过程中出现的事故,我国近来出台以下政策,要求寄送包裹的人在寄送时要使用身份证进行实名登记。然而该政策并没有完全消除所有的危险且会带来隐私泄露的风险。我个人的看法是,寄送包裹应该实名制,但应该加强法规,以减少隐患。
第二段:国家的政策实行之后仍然有很多问题。第一,在某些省份依然有人使用假名;第二,很多寄件人不配合政策,不愿意提供实名;第三,最严重的问题就是实名制后出现大量个人隐私被盗用的问题。
第三段:重申观点——使用快递不可避免,实名制也是必须,怎么保护好自己的个人信息,让寄件者和快递公司更好地合作是我们要考虑的问题。
精品范文
Real-Name Parcel Delivery, Security Guarantee or Privacy Threat?
A severe incident that parcels tainted with toxic chemicals had killed a man in 2013 caused China's State Post Bureau to enforce real-name registration for senders using the national courier service. That is to say, the senders are required to present their official ID when they deliver goods.However, in spite of the new rules, there is still a concern over the leak of personal information in real-name registration and the new system is not assured to hold back the danger caused by illegal or hazardous goods. Therefore, as far as I am concerned, real-name parcel delivery is necessary but much more new regulations should be put forward to deal with the new privacy threat it brings about.
There are many serious threats even after the state's policy is carried out. Firstly, in some provinces the parcels with fake sender names are still accepted and most couriers fail to check what is inside the packages. Secondly, many of the senders refuse to work with the couriers, because they think it is unsafe to unveil their information, and therefore the couriers can hardly verify their real information. Thirdly,the worst problem is probably the leak of the personal information. If your phone number is leaked to real estate agents, you will have to receive lots of harassing phone calls, some of which may even indicate your name, your address, your workplace, and even your personal account.
As China moves into the era of E-commerce, courier services are gradually turning into an inseparable part of our life. At the same time, because of the lurking perils mentioned above, more strategies should be designed to help the senders and the delivery services better co-operate with each other in order to move in a much smoother way.
2013年,有人收到了一个涂有有毒化学品的包裹并因此而丧命。这件严重的事故引起了中国邮政当局的重视,决定实施寄件者在使用投递服务时必须使用实名制这一政策。换句话说,寄件者必须在寄件时出示自己的身份证。然而,尽管出台了新的条例,人们依然担心新的实名制系统会泄露自己的个人信息,而且新的系统也无法确保不发生由非法品或危险品导致的威胁。因此,就我个人而言,寄件实名制是必须的,但同时也要制定更多的规章制度来应对将会出现的新的隐私威胁。
在国家颁布了新的政策之后,依然有很多严重的威胁产生。第一,在一些省份,快递公司依然会接收以假名寄出的包裹。而快递公司也无法检查包裹里面究竟是什么。第二,很多寄件人不愿意与快递公司合作,因为他们认为向对方提供自己的个人信息是很不安全的。因此,快递公司也无法得到他们的真实信息。第三,最严重的问题恐怕还是信息泄漏的问题。如果你的电话号码泄漏给房地产公司,那你将不断地收到骚扰电话。其中一些可能能准确地说出你的姓名,地址,工作单位,甚至你的个人账户。
随着中国走进电子商务的时代,快递业已成为我们日常生活中不可缺少的一部分。同时,因为以上所说到的这些潜在的危险,我们应该制定更多的政策来帮助寄件者和快递公司更好的合作共赢,朝更好的发展而努力。
亮点词汇
taint vt.使污染
hold back 阻止
put forward to 提出
lurking a. 潜伏的
leak n. 泄露
hazardous a.有危险的
unveil v.使公之于众
peril n.危险
万能句型/精彩语句
1. Therefore, as far as I am concerned, real-name parcel delivery is necessary but much more new regulations should be put forward to deal with the new privacy threat it brings about.(提出自己的观点并给出建议)
因此,就我个人而言,寄件实名制是必须的,但同时也要制定更多的规章制度来应对将会出现的新的隐私威胁。
2. Secondly, many of the senders refuse to work with the couriers, because they think it is unsafe to unveil their information, and therefore the couriers can hardly verify their real information.(人们对实名制寄件的担忧)
第二,很多寄件人不愿意与快递公司合作,因为他们认为向对方提供自己的个人信息是很不安全的。因此,快递公司也无法得到他们的真实信息。
