考研英语二写作指导

No.1                                                                          

大学生时间分配变化表

^{①总体解释}It can be clearly seen from the table that^（主语）time using proportions of college students change during the period from 1^st year to 3^rd year. ^{②起点解释一}In the beginning year of study, college students spent exactly half of their time doing academic works. ^{③起点解释二}And time for union activities ranked 2^nd（at 15%）and sports time least. ^{④变化规律}Then the three shares remained fairly constant during the 2^nd year. ^{⑤反常现象}However, what surprises us most is that, during the 3^rd year, the percentage of time for academic works rose dramatically to 95%, whereas time for the remaining two categories fell(shrunk) sharply to 2% and 3%.

从表中可以清楚地看出，大学生的时间使用比例在第一年到第三年期间发生了变化。在学习的初期，大学生花费了一半的时间做学术工作。而社团活动的时间排名第二（15％），体育时间最少。然后三个分配在第二年保持相当稳定。然而，令我们最惊讶的是，在第三年，学术工作的时间百分比大幅上升到95％，然而其余两个类别的时间大幅下降（缩小）到2％和3％。

There are several factors that may account for such changes. Firstly, it is natural for college students to use most of their time, no less than half, to do academic works. Moreover, during the first two years, sports and union activities are both essential for physical and spiritual health. In effect, spending almost all of their time on studies must result from the fact that junior students have been preparing^{（现在完成进行时）} for graduate entrance examination.

有几个原因可以解释这种变化。首先，大学生自然而然地使用他们大部分的时间，不少于一半，做学术工作。此外，在头两年，体育和社团活动对身体和精神健康至关重要。实际上，花费几乎所有的时间在学习上一定是因为大三学生已经准备毕业考试。

Given the analysis above, it can be concluded that^（主语）time allocation of college students massively varies in different stages of enrollment. It is fairly reasonable and wise that, while the largest time share should be utilized for academic improvement, college students should not ignore the essential benefits provided by sports.

根据上述分析，可以得出结论，大学生的时间分配在不同的入学阶段大不相同。这是相当合理和明智的，虽然最大的时间分配应该用于改善学习，大学生不应忽视体育的基本好处。

No.2                                                                          

中国居民交通工具使用变化表

^{①总体解释}It can be clearly seen from the table that the percentages of traffic tools of China’s residents change during the period from 1980 to 2010. ^{②起点解释一}Firstly, we can easily find that in 1980 the cyclists（the proportion of bicycle riders） accounted for the largest share, which was 70%. ^{③起点解释二}Moreover, there was exactly no one owning a private car at that time. ^{④变化规律}In effect, the percentages of private car owners rose gradually throughout the period. ^{⑤反常现象一}However, what surprises us most is that the proportions of cyclists dropped dramatically from 70% to 30% before they climbed slightly to 35%. ^{⑥反常现象二}Interestingly, the share of bus takers just experienced opposite route(direction).

从表中可以清楚地看出，中国居民的交通工具的百分比在1980年到2010年期间发生了变化。首先，我们很容易发现，1980年骑自行车的人占了最大的份额，为70％。此外，当时没有人拥有私家车。实际上，私家车拥有者的百分比在整个期间逐渐上升。然而，令我们最惊讶的是，骑自行车的比例从70％急剧下降到30％，然后略微上升到35％。有趣的是，乘坐巴士的人的份额恰好经历了相反的路径（方向）。

There are several factors that may account for such change. ^{⑦规律原因}First of all, an evident reason lies in the fact that when the economy has advanced to a high degree, urban residents must tend to consider private car as the most efficient traffic tool. ^{⑧反常原因}However, the modern citizen always take bicycle as their primary means either to safeguard the negative impact of climate change or improve the physical condition. ^⑨结论Thus, it can be concluded that buses as an economical means of travel will never vanish. ^⑩建议一Therefore, it is fairly reasonable and wise that urban dwellers should utilize bicycles as frequently as possible. ^建议二In addition, another suggestion is that…

有几个原因可以解释这种变化。首先，一个明显的原因是，当经济发展程度很高时，城市居民必须倾向于将私家车视为最有效的交通工具。然而，现代市民总是把自行车作为主要手段，以保护气候变化的负面影响或改善身体状况。因此，可以得出结论，公共汽车作为经济出行的手段将永远不会消失。因此，城市居民应该尽可能频繁地使用自行车是相当合理和明智的。另外，另一个建议是…

No.3                                                                          

我国居民年医疗开支和收入变化表（单位：万元）

^{①总体解释}It can be clearly seen from the bar chart that the medical cost and total income of China’s residents change during the period from 1985 to 2015. ^{②起点解释}Firstly, we can easily find that both medical spending and whole income accounted for the smallest share throughout the period. ^{③变化规律}In effect, there was enormous difference between the medical expense and total income. Moreover, both data rose steadily from 1985 to 2005. ^{④反常现象一}However, what surprises us most is that the total income fell slight from 2005 to 2015. ^{⑤反常现象二}Interestingly, medical expenditure shrunk significantly during that period.

从条形图可以清楚地看出，中国居民的医疗费用和总收入在1985年到2015年期间发生了变化。首先，我们可以很容易发现，医疗开支和整体收入在整个期间占比最小。实际上，医疗开支和总收入之间存在巨大差异。此外，这两个数据从1985年到2005年稳步上升。然而，令我们最惊讶的是，总收入在2005年到2015年期间略有下降。有趣的是，医疗费用在这一时期显着缩水。

There are several reasons that may account for such change. ^{⑥规律原因}Firstly, when economy has advanced to a high degree, China’s resident can afford more advanced medical care, which must be based on higher cost, positively correlated to growing income. ^{⑦反常原因}However, slightly decreased income may lead medical consumers to cut off their expense mostly due to the panic caused and the loss of sense of security.

有几个原因可能导致这种变化。首先，当经济发展程度很高时，中国居民能够负担更高级的医疗服务，这必须基于更高的成本，与收入的增长呈正相关。然而，稍微减少的收入可能导致医疗消费者切断其费用，主要是由于恐慌和失去安全感造成的。

No.4                                                                          

^{①总体解释}It can be clearly seen from the pie chart that the sales volume varies corresponding to different stage of a whole year. ^{②起点解释一}Firstly, we can easily find that the data of the 4^th quarter accounted for the smallest share, which was 10%. ^{③起点解释二}Moreover, it is interesting that the data of the 1^st quarter is precisely equal to that of 2^nd quarter, which was 20%, and exactly twice as many as the data of the 4^th quarter. ^{④反常现象}However, what surprises us most is that the sales volume in 3^rd quarter accounted for the largest share, which was 50%（which reached exactly half of the total volume）.

从饼图中可以清楚地看出，销售量的变化对应于一整年的不同阶段。首先，我们可以很容易发现，第四季度的数据占据最小份额，为10％。此外，有趣的是第一季度的数据与第二季度的数据精确相等，是20%，恰好是第四季度的数据的两倍。然而，令我们最惊讶的是，第三季度的销售量占最大份额，为50％（恰好达到总量的一半）。

六、完型词汇

While, whereas, however, still, otherwise, despite, since, barely, seldom, hardly, rarely,

compared, linked, subjected, opposite,

hold, argue, claim, suggest, contend, address, account for, matter, work,

process, picture, paradox (paradoxical), dilemma, plausible, available (availability), community, perspective, context,

according to, for example, for instance, in fact, in effect, indeed, rather (than), instead (of), comply with, conform to, turn out, in response, in terms of, in light of,

equivalent, alternative.