雅思写作学习18
Because of economic globalization,many goods including what we use as daily necessities produced by other countries have to be transported from a long distance. To what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
第二段:优点有利于世界资源优化配置
It is obvious that the productions imported from other countries can contribute to the optimization of resources world-wide. Recent surveys have found that nearly 60% of the countries or regions all over the world have to import goods from other countries with the aim of satisfying people’s requirements. Among those things from other countries, such agricultural products as fruits and vegetables rank first. Moreover,to purchase goods world-wide can ensure the best quality and lowest price. For example,the largest retailer,Wal-Mart,always purchases all the goods across the world so that the items sold in its supermarkets are cheap and fine. Finally,this pattern of importing goods from other countries also brings boom to transportation industry.
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第三段:进口的缺点
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Although the items importing across the world exist much valuation for people,they may lie in the following problems. First and foremost,all the transportation requires that the goods be well wrapped,wasting a huge packages. Besides,it might be harmful to our health that the chemical ingredients are added to foods because of long distance transportation. Eventually,long-distance transportation causes more pollution to the environment such as ships,truck,locomotive and planes emitting polluting gas.