考研一写作范文分析
Part A
Directions:Two months ago you got a job as an editor for the magazine Designs & Fashions. But now you find that the work is not what you expected. You decide to quit. Write a letter to your boss, Mr. Wang, telling him your decision, stating your reason(s), and making an apology.
Write your letter with no less than 100 words.
Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Li Ming" instead.
Do not write the address.(10 points)
思路点拨
本题要求写一封辞职信。内容要包括三点:第一,告知你的决定;第二,说明你的理由;第三,表示你的歉意。因此写信的第一句话应该开门见山,说明写信目的。中间部分解释辞职的理由。最后再用一两句话表示道歉。
参考范文
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am writing to tell you that I decide to leave my position. During the last two months, I enjoyed myself in the company where the interpersonal atmosphere was pleasant. But my job as an editor requires broad mind and extraordinary perception, and I find it hard to collect and comb all the materials and finally get logical organization. On the other hand, it is routine for people in the position to work late till morning,which exceeds my health condition since my feeble heart needs sound sleep to function.
I want to make an apology for quitting my position so soon and for any inconvenience it might bring to you. I hope you can understand my apprehension.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
参考译文
敬爱的王先生:
我写此信是想告知您我决定离职。在过去的两个月里,我在公司非常开心,这里的工作气氛也很好。但是我发现编辑工作需要很宽广的视野和极强的洞察力,而且我发现自己不是很擅长搜集、梳理材料并把它们有逻辑地整理起来。另一方面,在这里人们几乎天天通育加班,因为我的心脏很虚弱,需要很好的睡眠,所以我的健康状况无法适应这样的安排。
我很抱款这么快就离职,并对给公司带来的不便深感抱款。我希望您能明白我的顾虑。
谨致问候,
李明
范文点评
本文思路清晰,结构完整。第一段点明了写作目的,即提出辞职申请。第二段陈述了两个理由:一是自己的能力不适合这样的工作,二是不适应加班。结尾再一次点明自己的款意。
得分亮点
an extraordinary broad mind and perception
宽广的视野和极强的洞察力
to collect and comb all the materials
收集并梳理资料
it is routine to ...
做……是很正常的
Part B
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should first describe the drawing, then interpret its meaning, and give your comments on it.
You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.(20 points)
思路点拨
这篇文章主要批判有些子女不赠养父母,将赠养父母的责任像足球一样踢来踢去。全文应该分为描述图画、解释寓意和对图画进行评论三个部分。首先,描述图画。然后,把这幅漫画的意图说清楚,说明它给我们带来的思考。我们要通过现象看本质,为什么会是这样?这些年轻人到底怎么了?这些老年人为什么会是现在这种状况?最后,可以对这件事情发表评论,也可以写你的一些建议,或如何解决这个社会问题等。
参考范文
As is shown in the picture, there are four siblings, three sons and one daughter in the four comers of the picture, each keeping a goal net seriously as goalkeeper. Their old father crouches like a football and all about on the ground, being kicked around by his children.
This picture indicates the current deteriorating old-caring circumstance: many grown-up children refuse to provide for their aged parents, regarding them as heavy burdens; those miserable senior citizens have no strength to fight for their rights and benefits, only to be maltreated by their children that have been raised by their own hands and sweats.
This picture is thought-provoking to me. I feel sorry for those parents who have spent half of their lives breeding their children but at last become the deserted. People should reflect on this issue and what has happened to our ethical values including the traditional filial duty. We should enhance our education on the traditional virtue and fight against the morbid social backdrop. It's time that our traditional values restored and the senior citizens be taken good care of.
参考译文
图片显示出:四个兄弟姐妹——三个儿子和一个女儿——分别在四个角落守着球门。他们的老父亲像足球一样婦缩起来,在地上翻滚,被孩子们踢来踢去。
这幅图暗示了现在每况愈下的养老现状:很多已长大的孩子拒绝赠养他们年老的父母,认为父母们是负担。这些可怜的老年人没有力气去争取他们的利益和权利,只能任由孩子们欺负,而这些孩子可是他们辛辛苦苦亲手养大的。
这幅图让我思考很多。我对这些家长感到很伤心,他们大半辈子都在养育儿女,但结果却是被抛弃。人们应该反思这个问题,反思我们包括传统孝道的道德观念到底发生了什么。我们应该加强对传统美德的教育,抵制这种病态的社会风气。现在就是行动的时候,我们要重新找回传统美德,让老年人能够得到贴心的关怀。
范文点评
范文结构清晰,内容安排有序。第一段对图画进行了简洁生动地描述:三个儿子和一个女儿正在把他们的老父亲当球踢,各尽所能不让父亲进自己的“门”。第二段指出图画反映出来的社会问题:子女推卸赡养老人的责任。第三段发人深省,呼吁人们应该继续传承和发扬传统美德,关怀老年人。
得分亮点
n.兄弟姐妹 sibling
a.引起思考的 thought-provoking
伦理价值 ethical value
传统美德 traditional virtue
