大学英语四级写作指导一

湛江雅托英语培训中心大学英语四级写作指导【一】

 

写作要素：How to best handle the relationship between doctors and paitients

 

Mutual Understanding Is Most Important

 

首段

1、开门见山，引出话题：医患关系负面新闻居多

Whe we talk about the relationship between doctors and paitients，what comes into my mind is generally negative news.

【what comes into+名词（进入......）：引导名词性从句做主语；mind脑海】

2、表明观点：互相理解可以是医生与患者和谐相处

However，I believe there is a way for doctors and patients to get along harmoniously—that is mutual understanding.

【However，I believe +从句...（然而，我相信......）；There is a way for sb to do sth某人是可以做某事；get along harmoniously和谐相处；破折号：—that is...（那就是靠......）】

 

第二段

层次分明：On the one hand，.......  On the other hand，......

On the one hand，patients are helpless and worried when they go to hospital.

【be helpless无助的；be worrried忧虑的；be helpless and worried；help的形容词helpness；worry形容词worried；be+形容词作表语；】

So doctor’s attitude or response is critically important for them and their family.

【critically important至关重要；be+形容词作表语；critical关键的/至关的adj.--critically关键地/至关地adv.；副词修饰形容词、副词或动词；family家人】

On the other hand，doctors have to face so many patients every day that they even have no time to take a rest.

【so+形容词+名词+that+从句...（如此......，以至于......）；从句的主语代替前面主语；从句的宾语代替前面的宾语；have no time to do sth没时间做某事；take a rest休息；face面对】

Such a high intensity of work could drive a man crazy.

【such+a+形容词+名词（这种......）；high intensity of work高强度的工作；drive a man crazy把人逼疯；drive sb crazy把某人逼疯】

Thus，if they can stand in each other’s shoes，most problems could be solved.

【stand in each other’s shoes站在对方的立场上思考问题；stand in my shoes站在我立场上】

Otherwise，a doctor’s brief conclusion about the condition of patients might be regarded as cold blood and result on conflict.

【Otherwise，...（否则，......）；brief conclusion简短结论；brief conclusion about...（对......的简短结论）；the condition of...（......的情况）；the condition of patients病情；might可能{推测}；be regarded as...（被认为......）；cold blood冷血；result in...（导致......）】

 

结尾段

Nowadays，much efforts has been made to ease the tension of doctor-patient relationship.

【much efforts has been made to do sth已经做出很多努力来做某事；ease缓和、减轻v.；doctor-patient医患adj.；the tension of...（......的矛盾）】

But I think the most effective one is mutual understanding and trust.

【one{代词}方法；the most effective way最有效的方式；mutual互相的adj.；understanding理解n.；trust信任n.】