雅思图表写作静态图（饼状图+表格）

LESSON ONE

 

WRITING TASK 1

 

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

 

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.

 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

 

Write at least 150 words.

题目分析

 

本题包含一个饼状图和一个表格。饼状图显示了世界土地退化几个原因，即过度放牧（over-grazing)、过度种植（over-cultivation)、砍伐森林（deforestation)及其他原因。其中过度放牧是最主要原因。表格则显示了世界不同地区土地退化的比例及其各自原因。第一列为三个不同的地区，分别是北美、欧洲和大洋洲。后面三列为土地退化的原因及其所占比例，其中原因依次为砍伐森林、过度种植、过度放牧。最后一列为每个地区土地退化的总比重。数据以百分比的形式呈现。由表格可知，欧洲的土地退化面积比例最大，而北美土地退化面积比例最小。

 

建议布局

 

引言段：详细介绍饼状图的信息。

 

第二段：详细介绍表格的信息，可将土地退化的原因和所占比例结合起来分析。

 

收尾段对比得出土地退化严重的主要地区和主要原因。

 

参考范文

 

The pie chart shows that there are four main causes of farmland becoming degraded in the world today. Globally, 65% of degradation is caused by too much animal grazing and tree clearance, constituting 35% and 30% respectively. A further 28% of global degradation is due to over-cultivation of crops. Other causes account for only 7%collectively .

 

These causes affected different regions differently in the 1990s, with Europe having as much as 9.8% of degradation due to deforestation, while the impact of this on Oceania and North America was minimal, with only 1.7% and 0.2% of land affected respectively.Europe, with the highest overall percentage of land degraded (23%), also suffered from over-cultivation (7.7%) and over-grazing (5.5%). In contrast, Oceania had 13% of degraded farmland and this was mainly due to over-grazing(11.3%). North America had a lower proportion of degraded land at only 5%, and the main causes of this were over cultivation (3.3%) and, to a lesser extent, over-grazing(1.5%).

 

Overall, it is clear that Europe suffered more from farmland degradation than the other regions, and the main causes there were deforestation and over-cultivation.

 

范文翻译

 

饼状图显示了导致当今世界农田退化的四个主要原因。从全球范围来看，65%的土地退化是由于过度放牧和滥伐森林引起的，分别占到了35%和30%的比例。另外28%的土地退化应归结为过度种植农作物。而其他原因总共仅占到了7%。

 

在20世纪90年代，这些原因对世界上不同地区产生了不同程度的影响。其中欧洲有高达9.8%的土地退化归结于砍伐森林，而大洋洲和北美洲由于森林砍伐引起的土地退化程度最低，仅分别为各自土地总面积的1.7%和0.2%。在欧洲，不仅土地退化面积最大（23%),还存在过度种植（7.7%)和过度放牧（5.5%)。与之相反的是，大洋洲仅存在13%的农田退化，这主要由过度放牧（11.3%)引起的。北美的土地退化面积比例更低，仅为5%,主要原因是过度种植（3.3%),过度放收（1.5%)占的比例更小。

 

总体而言，欧洲的土地退化问题明显比其他地区更为严重，这主要是由砍代森林和过度种植导致的。